This is it

by bequi   Oct 18, 2007


ItIt wasnt long enough,
When our relationship had start.
The first kiss was so sweet,
The first hug was so engaging.

this isthe bond that veryone is dreaming of.
we created our world,
just me and my guy,
looking for forever side by side.

but that is how it all was.
moment now seems like a torment,
sour, bitter, and lie is what it taste,
sad that it started to fade.

Startled with whats going on,
a strong emotion starts to fill on;
Oh my God help me with this decision,
is still worth it to beat the threat

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  • 16 years ago

    by bequi

    Ie polarroid thanx for the message. im greatfull knowing someone appreciate my work.
    take care.. (,'?",)

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    NICE ONE, YOU'RE REALLY GREAT
    KEEP UP THE GREAT POETRY WRITING LOL

  • 17 years ago

    by bequi

    Ok thank you...
    i surely appreciate your rate

  • 17 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    Great... let me be the first to rate this... keep up... 5/5