by Roxy
HOLY!!! I am lost Just wow, that is all I can basically say you really got it going here babe. Amazing use of words and you real made it flow so well. It's just WOW! lol I seriously have no clue what to say its just...wow? -.- LOl xxxx mwah love you loads |
by Becca
I really liked this. It kept me wanting to hear more. Nice word choice and flow. |
by Corruption
Great poem |
Ok, Overall it was just ok in my opinion. The flow was good but could of been better. Your use of Vocab was moderate but that is quiet normal. Your structure was good, with a little help it could be excellent. |