You sure ur 13, most your age cant write this good but this poem is very good, a few things you can do to make your poems better(Dont Take This The Wrong Way, Your Poems Are GREAT): in the title, make it I Love You, older poets see it and will perfer to read it like that, alot of older poets dont read younger poets work, but i do, um, also capitalize the beginning of all the sentences and use proper commas and periods, other than that tis perfect, i give it a 5/5!!!

This poems is really so sweet its a really gud poems i love it neways :D keep it up