Night sky

by lil ashie   Oct 18, 2007


A twinkle in the night sky far far away
a golden star i gave upon in my dreams
on a sleepless evening i sing alone
tomorrow i will sing with you
on the wings of the dreams
a heart with wings can make you fly
a black lighting sky filed with wounder and hope
hope for your dreams
and then tomorrow i will sing with you
on the wings of the dreams

plz comment an ill comment back thanks

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  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    The flow was a little hindered by a few minor spelling mistakes. You might want to go back and use spell check,a common problem easily solved:D However I really like your imagery.
    The simplicity of this peice is just wonderful, and really adds to the peice.

    Beautiful Write,
    5/5 --Elly.

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