Jini,
I love the topic! A happy poem, for once ^_^. Although, you might want to put it in the happy section, Y'know?
I like how you used to form of a Senryu! Although just one more thing. You might want to tell everyone what type of poem it is ^_^
I have nothing to critisize, so great job, and keep it up! 5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori

P.S. If you get a chance, could you please comment and vote on one of my poems?
Thanks!