Wow..
amazing work
please check out my work when u can:)
takecare
-Lisa

This was good. keep it up

Im not gonna say that ' wow this is good ,keep it up etc etc , etc ' .

no.. cuz this deserves much more than that

i cant finger out a certain stanza that i like.. they're all effing awesome.. SIMPLY..

the starting, the ending and all thats in between.. a story of entangled beauty within lies and sadness .. a greatly put through write..

Love you work .. *you know i do*

~Wake~

Aww, this is beautifully written, the fluency and word choice was just amazing. Great job whit =)

I really like this poem, it's the fourth of yours I've read I think.
I quite like your work xD

But yeah, good work, and keep it up x]

5/5
xx