Okay. The flow was pretty good for different stanzas and lines.
one stanza I think you could work on is this one;

"I've been dreaming
of a day
when you'll hold me tight
and never let go
a day when nothing
will go wrong
and the love for me
you'll always keep. "

I'm going to try to help. You don't have to accept if you don't want, it wouldn't bother me. It's just my opinion (:

First off, capitalizing all I's is important. Very important. It's like. . . a rule. it just helps the poem look neat. Not all I's as . .. Important. Lol. . . Meaning like. You and I. or I love you.

Second off that stanza. . .
could go more like this.

I'm dreaming of a day
when you'll hold me tight
never to let go of me.
And, nothing will go wrong
for your love to me
will always be the same.

Now, that's my style.
But, it's a way tos how you how to change it, and maybe improve it.

Other than that stanza and your I's.
You did a great job.
4.5