The End Includes a Rainbow

by Corruption   Oct 19, 2007


In the frightful NIGHT,
lives a SILENT HELL,
made of DEATH and chaos,
they live in out MYSTIC thoughts.
as we sleep beneath the MOON
when our thoughts turn COLD,
and the beasts get MAD,
we forsake our lives and shed their BLOOD,
as it RAINS horrid events,
in the end there will be a RAINBOW.

*this poem had special instructions to it, all of the capitalized words had to be included into the poem. my friend gave me a list of words and told me to write a poem including them all.
here is the list : hell death mystic
mad blood silence
night moon cold
rainbow

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I love the title. It's so twisted. XD I love when people take dark poems and put something fluffy in it. ^_^ Your work reminds me a lot of my old work. I liked this poem and thought you did a fine job with the words. 5

  • 15 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    Wow! you worked with these words really well.
    I spose it helps that all the words are partly similar.. when i ask my frends o do this they give me random non-related words haha.

    But well done on this you made all the words fit perfectly together & created a good flow.

    *Hunny*

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I love it, you had great list! Excellently written, it has very dark, special and unique tone. Atmosphere that you created is powerful, this poem is short but so effective and captivating. Well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    This is a good one I think it's really cool that you used specified words in it kinda proves that no matter what to word it can always be used in poetry. Great job I really like it bravo Keenan.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    I reamember this poem from class today lol...
    great poem :)

    ashleigh

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