I reamember this poem from class today lol...
great poem :)

ashleigh

This is a good one I think it's really cool that you used specified words in it kinda proves that no matter what to word it can always be used in poetry. Great job I really like it bravo Keenan.

I love it, you had great list! Excellently written, it has very dark, special and unique tone. Atmosphere that you created is powerful, this poem is short but so effective and captivating. Well done!

Wow! you worked with these words really well.
I spose it helps that all the words are partly similar.. when i ask my frends o do this they give me random non-related words haha.

But well done on this you made all the words fit perfectly together & created a good flow.

*Hunny*

I love the title. It's so twisted. XD I love when people take dark poems and put something fluffy in it. ^_^ Your work reminds me a lot of my old work. I liked this poem and thought you did a fine job with the words. 5