Why?

by That One Girl   Oct 19, 2007


Why is it everytime I look in your eyes I feel safe?
Why is it when I talk to you I forget my hate?
Why is it that when you touch me my heart leaps?
Why is it that i love you so much, but you dread my touch?
Why am I waiting for you?
Why dont I know what to do?
Why did you steal my heart,
Then watch me fall apart?
Why do you treat me so low?
Why cant I let you go?
These are the things i want to know
Just one last thing before i leave
Why do I love you
If you dont love me?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Why?? let me tell you why , you get in too fast too much feelings exposed
    dont expose your feeligns , soo fast so intense , before he do , if you do you risk loosing , all you have

    being safe and all is a good thing, but you need to do it easy

    as structure:
    i hope you split into paragraphs , and work moreon the rhyming to be perfect:)
    good work

  • 16 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    I know how you feel i love it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by A Good Man

    I been through something like that before.
    I had some pretty hard relationships in the past but it only made me stronger.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cody

    Great Write 5/5
    This is my favorite part

    'Why am I waiting for you?
    Why dont I know what to do?
    Why did you steal my heart,
    Then watch me fall apart?
    Why do you treat me so low?
    Why cant I let you go?'

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    I Love this !! Great poem :)

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