Good conclusion. I'm beginning to enjoy free verse more and more. Yours was well put and easy to relate to. The message you left was actually quite humorous, u comment mine i'll comment yours, but hey! Here I am commenting. I'm always up to having someone really tell me what they think of my work. So I hope to hear your thoughts. I'll be reading more of yours!
*ME*

This poem is very nice as well. Good.

Awsome job, I can totaly relate. Love is hard to find and you cant be looking for it to find it.

This poem is cool, i can partly relate to it cuz the person i luv atm i dont think likes me back :( but oh well u neva know. i luv the way u wrote it its cool good work

5/5

Awesome Poem.. The Flow Was Great and It Was Defintly A 5/5, Good Job!!
perfectlyBROKEN xx

5/5 wow i really liked thiz poem...i really know how u feel cuz i feel that way bout sumbody right now..idk what it iz about him he juzt make me feel special..newayz great poem it flowed really good and i really liked it..keep writing
much luv
peachez

Great poem......i can relate so much, i suck to love someone who dosent love you back. keep up the good work

I Love this !! Great poem :)

Great Write 5/5
This is my favorite part

'Why am I waiting for you?
Why dont I know what to do?
Why did you steal my heart,
Then watch me fall apart?
Why do you treat me so low?
Why cant I let you go?'

I been through something like that before.
I had some pretty hard relationships in the past but it only made me stronger.

I know how you feel i love it 5/5

Why?? let me tell you why , you get in too fast too much feelings exposed
dont expose your feeligns , soo fast so intense , before he do , if you do you risk loosing , all you have

being safe and all is a good thing, but you need to do it easy

as structure:
i hope you split into paragraphs , and work moreon the rhyming to be perfect:)
good work