by Natalie84 Oct 19, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Wounded by violence |
by PygmyPuff
Oh wow the detail in this is stunning. The structureless flow is so great; it seems to be whimsical across the page, despite the more serious of a topic. |
by Angie
You have a way with words that just grips the reader. This is one damn powerful write, filled with pain and sorrow. Its just awful what goes on out on those streets, bloodshed and tears.... excellent write Nat Nat. |
This really made me think... Whole poem is deep and excellently written, every stanza contains great descriptions and hollow truth about reality. Enjoyable and touching piece, filled with meaningful thoughts. |