This really made me think... Whole poem is deep and excellently written, every stanza contains great descriptions and hollow truth about reality. Enjoyable and touching piece, filled with meaningful thoughts.
The ending is so effective, so true and sad...
5/5 from me

You have a way with words that just grips the reader. This is one damn powerful write, filled with pain and sorrow. Its just awful what goes on out on those streets, bloodshed and tears.... excellent write Nat Nat.

Oh wow the detail in this is stunning. The structureless flow is so great; it seems to be whimsical across the page, despite the more serious of a topic.