This is another great poem but this one is more beautiful poem, she's a lucky girl to have someone like u. 5/5

Beautiful poem! It flowed wonderfully, and a joy to read. Keep up the good work!

Luv this poem it flowed nicely and kept me hooked till i finished reading

5/5

Awwww. this is so pretty. the only suggestion is not using sorrow twice. =]

I adore most of your writings because it was simple yet you can still manage to make it elegant and sweet.. just like this one. so sweet, nice wordings and rhyming. keep it up!

Aww that was so adorable i loved it so much!!!

Faaaaaaaantasticc

You didn't make this up. amazing write.

I loved this a lot,
I loved the flow, and your word choice,
and what you were saying,
i can relate to it A lot

amazing job, 5/5