Silent Cry

by XxXLoveSucksXxX   Oct 19, 2007


Alone in my room. All to myself. No one to watch no one to say that I'm dumb or a big mistake. so there all alone in my room i let out my silent cry one little cry just before i die. alone in my dark cold room the smell makes me gag its a new smell not that of filth not that of beer but the smell of smoke of fire of death yes i could run but what is the point my little legs can't take me far. mother is gone father is passed out on the floor the fire has already reached him. alone in my room fire at the door. Just before i die i let out my silent cry

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  • 16 years ago

    by Strange and Beautiful

    This poem was sick! I loved it!
    It's dark and mysterious.
    I really love the emotion.
    5/5
    Great work!

    ~JaNA~

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Awesome poem! Way to go on this one. I loved the emotion. You have real talent, dont ever waste that!

    -xx-

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Ur poems are dark but i like them. 5\5. amazing

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