Great poem. I've been through this and I know it hurts a lot.

5/5

Keep up the good work.

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Your flow was done well and the message was clear all and all a good poem I was happy to read it. Plot121

Very emotional poem, I could feel the pain and the anger in the words as I read them. very nice job 5/5 GG23

Lovely poem. i really enjoyed it! keep writing!

Good poem, very emotional and filled with pain and anger. I have just one suggestion: You should capitalize I in some stanzas. Other than that, nicely done.

This how I feel about my pain. Really nice work describing everything.

Wow, this poem is full to the point of overflowing with emotions. It's crammed with pain, anguish and sadness. Really expressed well.

My only problem with this is the lack of punctuation, I don't see a single punctuation mark anywhere in it. I would backtrack through it and alter that, it really adds to a poem.

Other than that; very nice job.

~Pete.

Very strong emotional poem....beautiful job! :) Well written and a good read, keep up the great work!

This was great! It was simple yet flowed perfectlly. I loved the pace and how each word held such power.

"fall apart at the seems"
^I think you mean "seams"

well done *5/5*