Aww.I really admire this poem.

I love the poem, but one thing, you need to fix the grammer, the i's need to be capitalized, ex: I, do not use slang, ex: u, use the full word ex:you, capitalize the beggining of stanzas and sentences, not saying this isnt a good poem, i love the poem, fix the grammer and youll get more comments!!! i give it a 5/5!!!

I think your poems are great. Better grammer would be a good idea. Capitalize what needs to be capitalized and spell things correctly. Other than that, I think your poems are absolutely wonderful! Keep up the good work!

Wow this poem is so sweet i love it
i liked it so much i put it on my favorites list

Its a nice simple poem,with nice words and good rhyme :) well done