by Laurenf7 Oct 19, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Life can be like a roller coaster |
by Shinobi
The song is nice a catchy. The rhymed could be better and the concept is nice. Although that, the song seems unfinished, the end is a little weak. Luck in future poems, 4/5 |
by leinhart
Love it when you say live life like its last, thats the best way to live, with laughter all aroun,,! |
by leinhart
Love it when you say live life like its last, thats the best way to live, with laughter all aroun,,! |
by Nicole
This is really good. i enjoy reading your work keep it up! |
by country girl
Thats awsome, thanks for the coment on my poem too |