Tis a very good poem, the grammer is perfect, love the flow, its a flawless 5/5!!!! keep them coming!!!

Thats awsome, thanks for the coment on my poem too

Thats awsome, thanks for the coment on my poem too

This is really good. i enjoy reading your work keep it up!

Love it when you say live life like its last, thats the best way to live, with laughter all aroun,,!

Love it when you say live life like its last, thats the best way to live, with laughter all aroun,,!

The song is nice a catchy. The rhymed could be better and the concept is nice. Although that, the song seems unfinished, the end is a little weak. Luck in future poems, 4/5