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by xxSuicidalxx Oct 19, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / about death
You say you care Then why weren't you there You say you love me Then why aren't you here I'm forgotten to you Forgotten forever Your lies and faking Really hurt When i needed you You were never there When i needed comfort You didn' care What will you think When you see my casket With me in it realizing you had part of this? Will you feel broken Like i felt Will you feel bad For what you did to me? For now I am sitting bleeding and broken Dying and breathless Tonght..forgotten Because of you
by Tripp
I liked this stanza a lot "When i needed you You were never there When i needed comfort You didn' care " good rhythm and meaning behind it. The same applies to the rest of the poem. good job.