An excellent poem with an even better message. you've got some awesome talent going for you =] keep it up.

Mm yous tart of good way , but i hope you add and work more on the rhyming in the poem it give her more ring in the mind of the reader

it is good one keep up the good work

Aww...its touching..use to remind me of my best buddies..soo nice

Great. Heidee is very lucky to have you as a friend