This is really good too, i can relate to this poem. it flows really well and the structure well set out, i like this a lot especially the lines-
'I'm hurt from hate
I'm hurt from you ' good stuff
5/5

Good passion and feeling in this poem. You wrote very strong words and statements, although some of them were cliche. There are many different ways to express what you were trying to convey. Good work though!

Great job.. i love the repetition and it shows really great emotion. you are really good at getting your feelings across.. great job! keep it up!!! :o]