"The Ghosts of my life are..." I like that line. All very well put.

Amazing poem. You described your troubles in life as ghosts who hunt you. I liked the concept. The rhymes and flow was great here as well, keep up the good work 5/5

Perfect consecutive rhymes I shoud say with appropriate lexis used and having a smooth flow. Like it the way you have written :)

With sheer appreciation
Fsams

I like this piece. It is haunting, it flows well and the ending is excellent. Nice job!