A sweet poem expressing the outrage of being underestimated,

take care

Her Guardian

This poem is very good!
Great job it had a nice flow
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I like it alot it has a great flow and i can relate you should coment my poems

Thast a sweet poem

A lot of emotions...well written!

I almost cried, I really like this poem. l;

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You written it so wonderfully. Great write 5/5.

Great job
This poem is very good
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5/5

Very nice... straight from the heart! Enjoyed it!

There is a lot of frustrated anger in this poem. I enjoyed its beat and found myself reading it out loud in an aggresive tone, almost spitting the words at some parental figure, perhaps!!? Imagining them cowering at my words of distaste, while you demand answers to your question....the sad reality is though, that these words are festering inside and not delivered to those thay are intended for.

A very good piece, one that sounds great when spoken out loud.

Well done

Michael

Nice work :)