Comments : CantSleep.CantBreathe.(rhymes)

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    I like this, I like how you worded it! great work 5/5
    xx love

  • 17 years ago

    by Karlie Huber

    Wow your intense... If you ever want to talk im here for ya man.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mandy

    Awww.
    thats an amazing poem.
    you're awesome.
    very well written.

    P.S. thanx for the comment =]