Wow, great job.

I feel for you, try to be straight

Oh.. wow.. I know rite... speechless.. I can relate to this.. Nice job..

It's like hearing my boyfriend talking to me in a crysis...good job even without rhyme...powerfull, very powerfull...5/5

Keep up the good work

Carla

I love this. this is what i used to feel every day. i am glad someone could put it into words because i couldn't.

You can feel it when it slowly begins, yet you tell yourself you can stop when you want. You won't give in. You say you're not like your "friends", but before you know it, you're in a 5 day drug binge.

I can relate

Thanks for the comments man. I can relate in this one so much its like a person caged inside who wants to get out and the only to let him out is to give in to the addiction.

Yep i've been there before very good poem:-D

Mate im battling an addictaion as well. I have been addictesd to it for 5 yrs its fuycked this poem is great and really explains wat it is like to give p an addictin

ivve tried many times i can do it, but i cant last fr long, to many issues.

keep up the great write 5/5

Wow that was powerful n awesome i loved it!

One of the best on this site i know wut u mean by a drug addiction been there done that. anyways i loved the poem 5/5

Word! I like the line "It's the only voice you
want to hear"

Addiction it hit the spot for me felt i 'm living it .Like it alot

You said to read it, so i read it. and im glad i did. this was very effective, and hit home to me, as well as many others, im sure.

--HollywoodSmile