I see alot of fustration in this piece and I kinda see your point but with age comes with a greater understanding of why people do the things they do. Do go into a rant explore why they do things then you can have a better understanding in yourself and them just a thought I enjoyed your work Plot121

I love your flow. This one is really great "5/5" of course!!!

Gosh,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, what a dept the emotion! i can relate those few words and its mean a lot to me! how sad i was affected about how u expressed the emotion of this poem.. i can see that it comes to ur heart and theres a lot of strong feelings that it really express well.... great job5/5