Would You...

by Charlie Knapton   Oct 20, 2007


Would you care if I
died tomorrow? as I
stand here with the
rope.

Would you cry when
you hear the news as
they find me ten feet
off the ground?

Would you even be
there when they cut
me down? as my body
hits the ground.

Would you regret all
the pain you have
caused me? As they
bury me under the
tree.

And I ask you...Would You?

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  • 17 years ago

    by AlyssaBrook

    I really like it! I have tried writing Suicide poetry, and it just doesn't sound right to me. You know? This was VERY well written. You have a talent.
    =]

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    5/5 Like it! Its so sad, but very well written, keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nina

    Mmm... i wouldn't lol jks 5 out of 5 :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Nina

    Mmm... i wouldn't lol jks 5 out of 5 :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha

    How sad i love it

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