Dont sit back

by Finalgravedigger   Oct 20, 2007


You believe in darkness
that there is only pain
people are fake
and everythings invain.

But why let it be the same
all of it has remained
with no efforts you complain.

Sitting back and talking
if you want something
different you better start walking.

Going on with a life
you dont like
let your opinions fight
with actions as your light.

Its the only way
that one should claim
being ones self
and having a true name.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    A dark way of looking at the world, and people. And how well I agree with you. I see all that you see, and have heard the same thoughts. Excellent writing. Excellent.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    I rele liked this poem wow it was rele rele good very well exsperest i liked the way it was written good for u!!!<3

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem is creative, you expressed strong message but sometimes is truly hard to change anything. I like the way you wrote it, rhyming is also very good.

  • 17 years ago

    by AlyssaBrook

    Wow.
    I rather enjoyed reading this.
    You have a talent.
    =]

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