Wow.
I rather enjoyed reading this.
You have a talent.
=]

This poem is creative, you expressed strong message but sometimes is truly hard to change anything. I like the way you wrote it, rhyming is also very good.

I rele liked this poem wow it was rele rele good very well exsperest i liked the way it was written good for u!!!<3

A dark way of looking at the world, and people. And how well I agree with you. I see all that you see, and have heard the same thoughts. Excellent writing. Excellent.