This Girl

by perfectlyBROKEN   Oct 20, 2007


As i look into the mirror
I see a girl feeling distraught
I see a girl crying for help
I see a girl that is falling apart

She always cries herself to sleep
She always dreams of another life
She is always heartbroken
That she doesn't succeed with her knife

This girl has never been happy
But she has to act strong
She has to pretend shes OK
She has say that shes fine

This girl has been fighting for 15 years
And shes still finding her reason
Her reason to stay alive
She has cried so many tears

As i continue to stare in the mirror
I suddenly realize
That this girl that is broken
That this girl is me

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  • 16 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    Great Job!
    i love it!

    <3
    XxAshleyxX

  • 17 years ago

    by Courtney

    Aw
    this is so good
    very good
    i like it
    but its sad because this seems true

  • 17 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    Nice poem.... i can relate to that as well.....
    hmm... most of your poems are very hearfelt...

    Your a great writer

    Nadia

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ShAnEL

    Wow! so much emotions i liked it...i know how u feel cuz i'm jus like that girl...keep up the good work gave u a 5/5:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Krissymkitty

    I really like this poem b/c i have done that before and i never noticed how depressed i really was until i looked into the mirror...nice job....5/5