by adrian Oct 20, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I move like the shadows of night |
I really enjoyed that poem. it was very very nice... you've got some god given talent which is more than anyone can say for me... but you should keep it up and write more... |
by Lenny
Oooh! That's cool. Short and sweet. And succinct. Impacting. |
by TAYLOR
Luv it :) |
by Polaroid
Great great job... |
by Nix
I like it, it is short but very powerful, it has good atmosphere and last line is truly effective. I enjoyed reading it, it could be longer but you described your topic, which is great, on excellent way. Well done, it deserves 5.5 |