"We reached for heaven
but were burned by the sun."
^^ I LOVED IT.

I enjoyed the entire poem, darling. It had wonderful meaning, flow, and wordchoice.
It was just flawless. (:
I loved ittttt.

5|5

This was beautiful. Interesting flow, I thought. It seemed somewhat different from your other poems, but I really loved it. Once again, the imagery was great. :]