I thought this was a very sweet poem. i loved it. 5/5
Take care
xHSx

"Heart tearing to pieces
as i slowly cry.
wishing this never happened
trying to wipe my eyes dry."

These lines hit me most because I can relate! 5/5

Very deep and sad. I really liked it, it flowed smoothly and so very simple and relaxed. Well done keep it up. 5/5

Very deep and moving, you have such a warm heart! It is hard to forgive those who have wronged us a move on.

The last stanza you wrote particularly shows this. Keep up the good work!

Wow!! This reminds me soooo much of my best friend. This was amazing!

"Heart tearing to pieces
as i slowly cry.
wishing this never happened
trying to wipe my eyes dry."

^^Probably my favorite! It was passionate, deep, had lots of emotion.... 5/5!!

Wow its very emotional, like even though they hurt you, you love them so much you'll take them bak. no matter wht they've done, no matter what they do...you'll always have a place 4 them in your heart. sad but beautifully written
Xx...[retro babii]...xX

I loved this poem! Such heartache. You made it seem so real. 5/5

I enjoyed this poem, sad poems always touch my emotions more then love poems because sadness is such a painful feeling. I think you did a great job expressing your emotions throughout this. I could feel the heartache and feel your pain flowing throughout me. Again I like how simple and effective your poetry is, it's nice. Well done on this my favorite I have read of yours so far today. 5/5 ~Mel

I can almost feel your pain, must have been a horrible experience but it allowed you to write a great poem