I really love the meaning you convey here but hate to sound critical, its just you should improve the flow of the rhyme just a tad little bit. other than that your poem really grabed my attention.

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xHSx

This was so painful, sad and deep! Every word hit me so wonderfully! 5/5

Great poem, although the pronounciation could have been better and instead of writing it so simple pobably make it a little more complex. But good job anyway. 5/5

This is a really nice poem. I like how u started every line with the word u used on the last line. Great job 5/5!!

Very good poem, I thought some of it was a little cliche, but still very meaningful. I recall feeling this way before.

I liked it, the only thing that got to me was in the end you didn't capitalize the I, but thats small, and that you would have words at the end of a line, and then at the start of the next line. but overall, I liked it! Really meainingful

Rele sad but i love it!!