This poem is really good it is how i feel about someone right now amzy

This is great, I think you would like my Forget, its a bit longer but its the same general idea. One thing, I think its just a typo but you wrote "I can think of something else" and I think you wanted "I can't", But ill give ya a 5 anyway. Keep up the good work. ~Zach

I really liked this poem i though it was lovely. 5/5
Take Care
xHSx

Aww
I know how you feel :(
*~NearlyCrazy6~*

Love this. i soo can relate.
the words and emotions were very strong. my fav lines were...

And even if they kill me...

I can't stop loving you

I'm not entirely sure what to say, because while the repition of the first few words is what makes the poem I also feel that's what broke it. It seemed a bit *too* repetitive. The concept, while common was good and the overall flow to the piece was decent. 4/5

You got alot of can't here and the statement in it'self is very good but if you want the reader to truely understand your situation you may need to give exsample of why you can't so much I think the reader would be more inclined to want to read the whole poem if they understood the whole story. Plot121

Very good, I thought that was sweet something I probably should use to my gf. It was very simple and easy flowing. Good job. 5/5

Simple structure yet so effective and beautiful. Loved the content of this poem :)

5/5
Fsams

Aww...i loved it! Very beautifula and full of emotion! Great write! 5/5

I enjoyed this immensly...most of us have or still do feel this way at one time or another and poems such as this always bring up the sweet memory. very heartwarming poetic display. thanks for the opportunity to read. 5/5

IT'S OK BABY, YOU HAVE ME ALREADY, REMEMBER THAT.