Comments : As I Lay

  • 17 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    Wow!

    Such emotion used in this poem... It really is so sad!

    I hope you don't really feel this way!

    Keep writing!

    Danielle
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  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    Very strong, very emotional and you've described your pain very well.

    I'm sorry that others have made you feel that way about yourself. I'm sure you are not a nusiance. They are not doing right by you. It's not your fault. Young people have to make mistakes. We all make mistakes. That is how we learn. I hope you are not truly giving up on yourself, and that is your pain of the moment - It will all get better. Don't forget - And it's not your fault