This poem i can relate to heaps, but i thought it could of been a bit longer, but anyways good job, read mine im sure u can relate bcoz they r similar to this one.

Luv Fay :)

This piece is beautiful, so sad and emotional. I love it, very original and powerful write. You put your self in it and wrote it on a great way, very very deep. You few copy/paste mistakes in this poem so I suggest you to change them.
Anyway I enjoyed in this poem, well done!