This is filled with excellently expressed emotions and that made it truly superb. I can relate to some parts of this piece. Flow is little off in the second and the third line in the second stanza, but the rest of the poem is flawless. The last stanza is my favorite one, you wrote it with great and effective ending for the whole piece.
Keep up!
5/5 from me

Tammi sorry for getting here so late but had alot to do. I liked the poem a lot I gave it a 5 for the power of it's execution and the well thought out verses I enjoyed it and can't wait to read more Plot121

OH, OH OH! I love this poem! :D

Leave the title. Leave everything. This is just... kdfsjg. THE BEST THING I HAVE READ FROM YOU.

Oh man. I'm excited. Hahah. I can't even say anything or type. fdjgsf

FIVE! 5! UNO x FIVE!

Very good very good, i absolutley adored it,
about the title i think you should call it walking away, but thats just the opinion of a little 13 year old kid lol great keep it up

This was simply amazing. One of the best poems of yours I have ever read. It was so deep and interesting! I love the title don't change it! This is definitly what I needed to read today something breathe taking. 5/5 ~Mel

First off, I just loved the title. It was totally unique and captured my attention.

I just loved this poem ... the style in which you wrote was interesting and kept me hooked from beginning to end. The long lines flowed flawlessly and the message you expressed with clear in your last line .. beautiful.

When I read the first sentence I knew I was gonna like this piece because it was unique and wonderful.

"cheating at the game and still losing."
"A lesson learnt and never forgotten, a simple daydream."
"Coffee stained rings on the back of your television guide"
"Certainly not a catalogue misprint."
^this lines really caught my eye and made the poem perfect for me.

Well done *5/5*

5/5 LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT! it's real and u did a nice job writing it. keep the title cuz it makes ur readers wanna read more of ur poems simply cuz the title really has nothing to do with the poem, so they wanna read all of them 2 c wat ur really going through.