Envy

by Shinobi   Oct 20, 2007


We were friends
At least that was what you were for me
I am worth nothing for you
And That's the thing I'm sad to see

I see you with your friends
Smiling and joking around
While I watch I can't bare
To hear your precious laughing sound

Tried to treat you as a friend
Thought that friends are free
But every time I suggested meeting
You Turn your back at me

You keep calling me a friend
But I know that I could never be
I watch you with the others
And envy fills me

I tried being a good friend
Gave you my best
But in your eyes I can see
That I can never be like the rest

This is a poem about a friend of mine. I wrote it because of the way she treats me. All this time I thought that we had something special. She calls me a friend but treats me like someone she knows, and no better. That makes me envy. Some friend, hu?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    You seem to have a lot of probelms with girls.. or at least all your poems are about them.. idk.. you really knw how to to put a lot of emoiton into words.. great job

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    The vocab is simple but I think you pulled it off effectively. The flow was great the meaning behind it was simply sad and you portrayed it in a depth which spilled your emotions out onto the page. I liked this one alot and found it to be heartfelt. ~Mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    I have had trouble with people lately and i know how you feel. for me though i think i'd be the friend for me it is a different story. She was the most annoying person i knew. i show her one bit of realism and she acts like a leach.

    ok so that is not your story but it made me think of it
    good job
    Sam Mayo

  • 17 years ago

    by Dennis

    I really like this poem..
    I know exactly how you feel..i have a friend like that 2..
    But yeah i really liked it..=]

  • 17 years ago

    by Eri

    I love this and I so know what you mean

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