by AlyssaBrook Oct 20, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
(This is not about me, it is about a shadow. You'll understand once you read it.) |
by Amanda Bee
This poem was really good. I felt like you should be "spittin" it live on stage at def poetry jam or something. It was powerful yet simple. My favorite part was "In shadow I blend, in light I am visible..." Those lines conjure an image that allows me to actually feel like I am seeing the blending of the shadow and the light. |
by Samantha
I love it! I feel that way sometimes too! |