Untitled (this is actually a song)

by claire   Oct 20, 2007


Sung to the tune of Old McDonald:

jk jk this is actually quite serious. here goes:

Don't look beyond
Don't see through
Everything she does
She's doing to you
She's hurt you so much
Now its your turn
Light her heart on fire
Smile
and watch it burn

Now run away
Run far away
You don't have to act sorry
If you don't stay

If you're there and she's here
You won't see her cry
If you can't see her face
You can't watch her die.

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  • 16 years ago

    by loulou

    It's amazing! There's something special in it and i really liked your style...Finally i wanna thank you for your comment
    take care

  • 17 years ago

    by XxXTwistedxXxIllusionXxX

    It is very catchy and it is really sad, you did a great job a ryhming sometimes it seems like people force it but it flows beautifully

    -love whitney-

  • 17 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    This absolutely amazes me i hope maybe one day i could hear you sing this song the lyrics are a perfect start. oh and also thank you for the comments i appreciate it
    Take Care
    xHSx

  • 17 years ago

    by AlyssaBrook

    Wow. I liked this one a lot. I don't know why, though. XD I give it a 4-5, if I could, a 4.5.

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