I Have Been In That Position Before So I Can Defintly Relate,, I Love The Wording You Used And The Flow Of This Is Unbelievable,, Good Job And Thank You Soo Much 4 YOur Comment It Meant Alot
perfectlyBROKEN xx

Wow...see i love this guy and he knew it...as my mom would say i feel for him hard...i was at this dance working in the kitchen and decided to go find him just so i could at least see him that night...well, when i found him he was dancing with someone...that night i wrote a poem called Pain and i it helped but when i saw him it felt like my soul was gone, like it left me, ever since i haven't been the same...everytime i see him it feels like the "knife" that stabbed me that night just goes in deeper and deeper...so i can relate to this poem and i do feel like that..5/5

Thanxs for the comment, your right i like your stuff. this is really good. well done 5/5
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I absoloutly loved it!
Woaw, you've got such a perfect way to express how u feel, i just love how u wrote this poem..
Can't wait to read more!
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