by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Oct 21, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
The poem is what you see, but if you read the ( ) lines separately, they make a few sentences to go with the poem. You'll see what I mean. ^^ |
by MyEscape
That's very cool and I really liked it from beginning to end. It had some cool twists to the piece itself. I thought your inward sentences were neat and original as well. You did a nice job! |