by x Mo x Oct 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
White flakes like knives |
Whole poem is excellently written, very deep and filled with equal amounts of beauty and sadness. I like every stanza- your choice of words is great and brilliant descriptions created very vivid imagery in my mind while I was reading this. The flow is also flawless from the beginning to the end. I can't chose my favorite stanza, there are too many great parts of this piece. |
by Pesamenteiro
AMAZING...I loved the use of words and the flow and it wa sooo deep. |