Oh! That was a marvelous twist from contemplation to a secret... An answer to a question with so many questions and then an admission of guilt.... Or that's how I interpreted it. It flowed so well....from idea to imagery and then the last part made me gasp in joy...because it became so much more beautiful....I think I'm analyzing my reaction not your poem....either way your work generated an effect and that's what poetry is supposed to do.

The reaction the poem gave is the best part of it, so thought provoking, i love how it goes from thought to thought...it is like going through a day in the life of someone else.
Great Job
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