Amazing poem, darling.
It made me want to cry, and I agree to a point. I believe God wanted them to fight for us, to show us what a true 'savior'/'hero' was.
but, it's your opinion, and I respect it. (: It's a great poem, amazing flow [[you're pretty good at that]], emotion[[that as well]], and word choice[thattoo]].
You're a good writer, overall. (:
Keep it up darling.
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