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by Laurenf7 Oct 21, 2007 category : Love, romance / i love you
I had picked one yellow sunflower To put on the valentine`s care I was going to send to the girl I loved. We had been friends for 11 years Even though I loved her before. She guessed the card was me But thought of it as a cute joke. Through our teenage years Closer we grew Even though we were young It was her I loved , I already knew. She had a few boyfriends And I grew more jealous every time For I had longed for years To be able to call her "mine". A few years had gone Sadly, we had faded away We met in the street one summers day And I knew she was still the one. I put on my brave face Asking her out to dinner I was relieved when she replied with a "Yes." And knew my life was finally complete. At the age of 25 Our wedding was huge Before she walked down the aisle I gave her a yellow sunflower And watched one single tear roll down her cheek.
by Teria
Awh. That's so sweet. (: Amazing poem. Once again, though. Try to even out the lines. The flow was just a bit off. But, overall it was a beautiful and sweet poem. (: 4|5