What do I have to do?

Sad how much we crave to been loved like everyone else is.. Great job i really loved that last stanza.. amazing flow and rhyming

5/5

The flow was great on this poem, I found it to be held together nicely to create a sweet and sensitive poem which held deep emotions from being treated differently. I'm sure many people can relate to this poem so you didn't just write for you, you wrote for other people in the same situation aswel. Good work ~mel

This flowed excellently.
I liked the reptition it added to the peice. The feelings were relatible.. However I must say, - You shouldn't change yourself for someone, they should love you for you.
But other than that I thought this was a very good read.

Well done,
Elaine.

Maybe you and I have different look on poetry but I don't like this poem too. I really don't want to offend you, or anything like that, but only thing that I liked about this piece was your honestly expressed emotions. You know, you don't have to rhyme every poem, this one could be a lot better without it, because your rhymes in this poem was predictable and they seems forced, you just ruined flow with them.
I love deep poetry with a lot of metaphors, and good imagery mixed with emotions, so this isn't really my style. I won't rate it.

I LOVE THSI ONE!!!!!!!