Friends*
tried*

Okay, the poem was a good poem, with great potential. I've seen better though.
The flow was a bit off, you had that one really long line surrounded by short lines, and then the last stanza was a bit long as well. Try to even it out a bit.
The word choice was quite good, nothing wrong with that.
Actually, the only thing wrong with it was the flow, due to the long lines and such.

So, amazing job darling. (:
4|5

I know how you feel.. my first Boyfriend cheated on me almost before the relationship even started, should have been a hint right? Well I guess I was blinded to the love that would never be mine because I ignored the pain, ignored all his false qualitys, when in the end it should have ended at the start.
I love your poem...expresses how every girl feels after some idiot decides to cheat.
5/5 :)